|
Post by Zach Thomas on Feb 17, 2008 13:13:30 GMT -5
I would like you to do an original RP example with the character you are registering. (And is that example even your own? need to make sure.)
|
|
|
Post by Kiki Fang on Aug 2, 2008 15:01:35 GMT -5
The totally renewed profile ;D I'm redoing everything and making it new Name: Rainken no Chinese name meaning Shan Chinese name meaning "Mountain"Age: 16 Gender: Male Nationality: Born: Southern Water Tribe Currently Lives: Gaoling Bending Skills: Advanced Water Bender Master with Blood Bending works Personality: Rainken has been the kind of suspicious type since his father was killed. He has to be able to trust you for you to be his really close friend. If you act funny or different towards him then he's not going to be real sure about you. Rainken was 7 when his father was killed and he always blames himself for his fathers death. He hasn't got over it completely yet and he kind of lingers and thinks about it a lot. His mind is kind of manipulated by the memory. Rainken does have his very sweet side when he knows you. He becomes attached and you have a friendship that you won't forget. He's very generous and loving towards friends and family. If you're nice to him he'll be nice to you. He loves to crack jokes and make people smile or laugh. If you treat Rainken, his friends, or family badly then he fights until he drops with exhaustion. Rainken likes to be with his loved ones and have a great time wherever he goes. If you take Rainken somewhere he'll try to make the best of it even if he doesn't want to be there. Appearance: Rainken wears his hair back into a warriors wolf tail but it's not shaved on the sides. His hair is dark brown, his eyes are deep blue, his skin is tan like the people of the Water Tribe, and he stands at about 5'7. He wears the normal Water Tribe teenager's out fit with the blue shirt and pants. A small belt, brown boots, and the gloves made of what looks to be bandages and on his hand is blue material going around his ring, pinkie finger, and thumb. History: I guess I'll start out with the age of 5. Rainken became an uninterested warrior in training. He hated his training and he spent more time around his mother. Rainken was her little helper at her bakery. He watched his mother waterbend and was cutting training to spend more time with her. Rainken's twin sister, Shika on the other hand spent more time with their father in warrior training. The twins grew more interested in the other sibling's activity. Rainken liked watching his mother waterbend and Shika liked watching her father teach warrior training. Their parents couldn't get the twins to like their placed activities so they gave in. Rainken could learn waterbending and Shika could be a warrior. By the age of 6 Rainken became a beginner Waterbender. He spent his time aside from school baking with his mother and playing with his tomboy of a sister. A year later was the worst year of the Shan's life. Rainken was on the edge of the village practicing waterbending when a "sick" man approached him. He asked where someone might be able to help and Rainken said his mother was in the building with smoke coming out of the chimney. The man went into the bakery and attacked the people in it. He had Rainken's mother hogtied in a net when his father attacked. His mother was dropped and escaped but his father was stabbed and he died 2 hours later. Rainken has blamed himself for his father's death ever since. Apparently the man had been a pirate and went around trying to capture people and selling them to be slaves. Soon the family recovered from the tradgedy except for Rainken. He continued his training with his mother and Shika trained to be a warrior with a new teacher. At the age of 12 Rainken, his mother Aya, and Shika moved to the Earth Kingdom to start a new life. His mother opened a new bakery and currently the family have been living in the earth kingdom town of Goaling where they have restarted their new life RP Sample: It was 5:30 in the morning and a cool breeze blew threw the Shan's house windows. Shika and Rainken who shared a room were both asleep. At least that's what their mother thought. Rainken popped one eye open and then the other. He quietly got out of bed, got dressed, and fixed his hair. He snuck out of their room and down stairs to the kitchen. He found his spare key to his mother's bakery next door and headed out. Just as he was about to step out the door he heard, "Rainken, what do you think you're doing?" Rainken turned around to find his sister in her robe with her arms crossed and a terrible look on her face. "I was uh...I..I...was going to the bakery......maybe for a strudel or something!" He said with a smile. Shika stared at him for a few seconds. "Ok!" She replied with a smile. The twins headed out and over to the bakery. Rainken cooked a couple of strudels and two cups of coffee. He sat down across from his sister and took a sip of coffee. He took a look at the sun rising over the mountains. "Hey....look at that." Rainken said quietly. Shika looked over and frowned a little. Rainken knew by the look of their faces that they were thinking about the same thing. Their dad. Shika let a sigh and said, "I miss dad.". Rainken got up and hugged his sister. "Me too." He said.
|
|
|
Post by Sachi on Aug 2, 2008 22:01:10 GMT -5
Hello again, Shika! ;D
Rainken is approved, but are you still keeping Shika? I'm confused right now...okay. So you're current two characters are Rainken and Shika, right? No Bon Lay?
|
|
|
Post by Kiki Fang on Aug 2, 2008 22:08:21 GMT -5
No I only have Rainken now did I forget to delete Shika off?
|
|
|
Post by Sachi on Aug 2, 2008 22:15:31 GMT -5
Well, you didn't...I really don't remember. But just as long you know which characters you don't have anymore, I'm sure it's fine.
So then you only have Rainken? Right? No one else?
|
|
|
Post by Kiki Fang on Aug 2, 2008 22:20:30 GMT -5
No one else just Rainken
|
|
|
Post by samiemack on Aug 4, 2008 11:32:22 GMT -5
Name: Mercy Tanaga
Nationality: Water Tribes (Northern Water Tribe)
Bending skills: Master Water Bender
Character's age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: Mercy is 6 foot, she has brown hair and green eyes. She has different colored eyes for some reason, unlike the casual blue. She wears a normal daily wear of a lady water bender.
Personality: Mercy is always happy. She barely gets angry but when she does, it causes chaos. She is kind and genrous especially to young ones like children. Mercy is easy to make friends, especially with the young kids. She hates men who don't think she is worthy because of her gender. Mercy dislikes people who are cold hearted to any of the friends she has. Mercy is also a determined and skillful waterbender, she always practiced on her own time and used it during her fishing job.
Short description: Mercy was born in the Northern Water Tribe. Her parents died of a disease that was spread among the people at her age of 6. The leaders of the Northern water tribe took care of her until she was able to do that herself. Mercy was then fighting for herself at age 12. She was pretty mature for her age and able to aford a nice apartment by doing work. She was pretty tall for her age as well. Mercy works as a fishermen, catching fish with her waterbending. She dreams of being use to the milatary of the Water tribes and her other dream is to visit her fellow people in the Southern Tribe. She tries to get into the milatary but she is unexcepted for being a woman. They barely let her be a fishermen.
An RP example: Mercy closed the door of her small apartment. She slipped the keys into her wool jacket. A smile came onto her face as she ran down the streets of the Northern Water Tribe City. She raced and skid down the corners and turns of the empty streets, it was early morning. Mercy was always coming early for her job, always cheerful everyday. She then made the final turn and trotted towards the docks. She was in a casual daily outfit, she didn't have to worry about being dirty much, infact her appearance didn't really matter to her. She went onto the docks of the Water Tribe City. A fisherman waved at her and said, "Quite early! As usual!" Mercy jumped onto the medium sized boat, not too big, not to small. She smiled at the other fishermen that stumbled onto the boat after her, it was hard for them to wake up so early. They weren't like the other fishermen though, they accepted Mercy for being who she is, it didn't matter if she was man or woman, she was still good at catching some fish!
|
|
|
Post by Alastar on Aug 4, 2008 13:19:02 GMT -5
Well everything here checks out good here, Approved! Feel free to RPG and hi!
|
|
|
Post by samiemack on Aug 4, 2008 14:40:14 GMT -5
Thank your very much and Hi right back at you ^^
|
|
Bliss
Labourer This is a new forum member.
[M:0]
Where there is life, there is death
Posts: 6
|
Post by Bliss on Aug 13, 2008 10:47:27 GMT -5
Name: Arya Mei-Lin Age: 16 Nationality: Earth Kingdom Bending: Earthbender
Appearance [/u][/size] Hair: Dark brown and reaches to her stomach Eyes: Sky blue Height: 5'5 Weight: 120 lb Figure: Average Attire: Fire Nation clothing, although she is from the Earth Kingdom. Arya prefers red. Personality[/u][/size] Pro's-Confident -Smart -Outgoing -Friendly -Funny Con's-Impatient -Lazy -Over-confident -Rude -Loud Family:- Mother - Lan Mei-Lin - Father - Xin Mei-Lin - Brother - Dong Mei-Lin - Brother - Sune Mei-Lin - Sister - Fen Mei-Lin - Cousin - Sachi Yu Xuan - Cousin - Kyarii Yu Xuan History[/u][/size] Past: Ages 0-15Arya was born in the Fire Nation, her parents serving the Fire Lord loyally. However, they didn't like the way Fire Lord Ozai ruled his people, so they "escaped" to Omashu when Arya was just four years old. Arya already has two older brothers and one younger sister who is believed to be dead. Her family was large, and she looks a lot like her closest cousin who inhabits Ba Sing Se. Her mother, Lan, had a twin sister who is currently dead. Arya's Aunt and Uncle were killed by the Fire Nation, but her two cousins were still alive: Sachi and Kyarii. Despite Lan's sister's death, Arya's father decided to make another big change upon his family. He decided to serve the Fire Lord again. This caused a huge impact on Lan since she absolutely detested the Fire Nation after everything it has done to her family. Unable to forgive what her husband did, Lan had a divorce and dragged Arya to the town of Hui Kong. Due to her mom's divorce, Lan was twice as busy. The divorce was hard on both parents, since Arya's dad still loved her. Her brothers were always willing to help; her oldest brother was already married and now lived somewhere back at Omashu. Her other older brother works around the town. Arya basically helps around the house and practices earthbending since her mom was too busy to train her. Arya looks exceptionally like her mom, blue eyes, dark hair, and she's even the same height as her. From what Arya knows, Sachi also looked like her mom. In Sachi's case, she had her father's eyes - dark brown - and her mother's hair. From their appearances and thanks to Lan's almost-identical characteristics with Sachi's mom, Arya could be Sachi's sister to a stranger. Of course, Kyarii has her mother's eyes, so her part in her relationship with Arya were their sights and naturally, their hair colors. PresentArya's family, except for her oldest brother, moved to another town called Ze Long near Ba Sing Se. She lives there now and visits the Yu Xuans often. Arya's bending skills continues to grow gradually from intermediate to master, and master to something else. From what Kyarii has described her, she might surpass Sachi in earthbending, but not exactly in metalbending or sandbending. Arya's skills at the arts of war could not be compared to Sachi's knowledge, either. But she's smarter, wiser, and just as creative. Arya visits her cousins on a daily basis, or whenever she has the time. Sample RP: A cool autumn day - rich blue sky that was the same color as her eyes and rolling green grass - was her favorite weather. The trees' leaves were gently falling down in spiral motions, landing softly on the ground as the girl was careful not to tread on them. She sniffed the air delecately, intrigued by the unique smell that seemed to be radiating from the trees. Her hand reached out to touch the saps, picking it up and popping it in her mouth. She was used to the wilderness, quite like the rest of her family who were earthbenders. Her father was a mystery, however. He loved hiking and enjoying nature, but he often spent his time in his office - Arya smirked at that word - rather than spending it in the forest. At least she could count on her cousins. The sap tasted slightly off. Instead of its usual, chewy and minty flavor, it was harder and more like a peanut than its usual squishy substance. Surprised and disgusted at the same time, Arya bent over the tree and spat it out. Then she buried it in the dirt. She didn't even know if it would help the soil, but it felt nice to do that all the same. Taking a walk near the forest at Ze Long had the effects of the three R's: Relaxing, refreshing, and regenerating. Arya did this whenever she had so many things cramped into her head, and the walk helped her leave those thoughts for awhile, strengthening her will power so she could deal with it later. Mulling over minor details of the thoughts was part of the stroll, too. Currently, her biggest worry was on how the Yu Xuans would react on the part of moving to Ze Long. Sachi had made it clear that that certain town was the town she visited whenever she had the time. She said that it was...part of her. Arya didn't exactly understand what she meant by that, but she decided that it was more or less a territorial response. To Arya's astonishment, she was gazing at her house again; a tan colored, two-story building with a comfortable amount of rooms. The walk, as usual, felt as if it was only five minutes long instead of two or three hours. Feeling the dreaded emotion of returning to her thoughts, Arya opened the door to her house and walked inside. Her brother, Sune, was waiting for her, a troubled expression on his face. "Is something wrong?" Her head immediately flickered through the possible situations that could happen on a normal autumn day, as perfect as it was. Unfortunately, she came up with none, unless her father decided to pay another unexpected visit. Her mom would, no doubt about it, throw a fit. Sune shook his head with a wry smile. "No," He said with a shrug. "But Sachi and Kyarii's here. Sachi looks annoyed." He gave a short burst of a nervous laugh and walked away. Arya sighed, exasperated. Sune always took things so seriously. Her blue eyes gazed toward the living room half-heartedly and she sighed again. Knowing exactly where the were, and probably guessing what Sachi's face might be like, Arya squared her shoulders and prepared to greet her cousins.[/size][/blockquote]
|
|
|
Post by Sachi on Aug 13, 2008 17:42:27 GMT -5
Approved Remember to fill your profile options out =]
|
|
|
Post by Alastar on Aug 13, 2008 17:45:15 GMT -5
I wouldn't object to saying APPROVED! nicely done by the way
|
|
|
Post by Zach Thomas on Aug 18, 2008 1:57:37 GMT -5
my staff handling the place all on their own! *tearyeyes*
|
|
|
Post by jaine on Aug 30, 2008 20:12:24 GMT -5
Your character's name: Jaine
Nationality: Fire Nation
Bending skills: Fire Bending
Character's age: Sixteen [16]
Gender: Female
Short description (family background, appearance, etc):
FAMILY - Yu Lin - Mother Ki San - Father Kijun - Baby Brother
LOOKS: Jaine has shoulder length dark brown hair with bright blue eyes. Not the usual Fire Nation girl, Jaine doesn't talk much... okay, that was an understatement. Jaine doesn't talk at all. If she does it's some emotionless insult. Jaine is about five foot six, not the tallest girl around and not the shortest.
An RP example (8 sentences, your best):
Jaine sat outside of the party raging indoors, fuming in her spot on the balcony, though looking completely calm. One of her 'friends' decided it would be fun to throw a party since Jaines father was fighting in the war and her mother ran off with her little brother shortly after he left, now two hours ago. Jaines long legs were pulled up to her chest, her chin rested on her knees. Jaines bright blue eyes scanned the perfectly blue sea horizon, searching for something. Just... something. A crash sounded from inside, and Jaines eyes grew wide as many shocked gasps could be heard and the music stopped playing. If Jaine was a wild cat, she'd start growling and rip all of their throats out. Now, however, Jaine would just settle for standing up and shaking in pure anger. Jaine sighed, pushed the door open, and walked swiftly to her room, stuffing one change of clothes into a bag, then weaving her way through the scared party guests to the kitchen, taking some water and fruit and stuffing that in the bag as well, all the while a scowl imprinted on her features. Jaine walked quickly, her long stride lengthened even more now that she was angry. The 'friend', named Su Rin, that threw the party stepped in front of Jaine, causing Jaine to stop immediately. "Where are you going, Jaine?" Su Rin asked her with that same tone that annoyed Jaine to no end. "Away." Jaine told Su Rin without a tone, dodging around the insanely annoying girl and out the front doors, heading out on the pathway.
That would be the last time Jaine would ever be in that house.
History: Jaine was born an happy, only child. When the time came that Kijun saw the world, everything changed. Jaines mother started to disappear for long period of time, and when she was home, arguments and fights always occurred with Jaines father. Jaines father was a very nice, caring man, but he couldn't help but fight back. Jaine usually left the house when fights occurred, the pain of her parents fighting too much for her. As the years passed, Jaine became more and more emotionless, a mask of aloofness and sarcastic remarks covering every emotion felt. Kijun came and left as he pleased, mouthing off to his father and sucking up to his mother. Jaine grew close to her father, and grew more distant with her mother. When Jaine turned sixteen, her father went to join the army. Jaine mother and brother ran off shortly after that, never to be seen again, leaving Jaine all by herself, no friends or family. Jaine had enough. Jaine packed everything she needed and left. Where, who knew, but that didn't matter. All that mattered was getting away from that house.
Personality: Jaine, simply, doesn't really have one. Jaine remains aloof a mask of calm surrounding her. Jaine hates the world because of her mother and brother, and is bitter to anyone who tries to show her compassion. Jaine is known for her sarcasm, and never stays too much in one place. Jaine travels from place to place, practicing fire bending and eating and sleeping. The days had lost importance, along with the time. Secretly, Jaine hopes to make an alliance with a few people, just to stop being a loner, though that seems far, far away.
(Also, if it is accepted, please fill out the RP info spots (for both characters if you have two) in your member profile with the info you submitted here.)
|
|
|
Post by Sachi on Aug 30, 2008 22:45:57 GMT -5
Could you maybe type up a short history and personality of your character? Then it will be accepted
|
|